LONELINESS

I am so very lonely
The cold gets to my bones
I am solitary and alone
There are no real friends
I don’t need a crowd
Just someone to fulfill me
I feel so deep and empty
The hollowness is killing me

Thus I sit and wait
But time waits for no one
As the clock ticks the hours
And days and weeks go by
The crescent moon waxes and wanes
And the years roll away
Like palm fronds waving at the sky
My arms are wide open

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Permalink Reply by charles amobi nwokoro on February 17, 2011 at 5:05pm

good poem.Can make a great song-hahaha.

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Permalink Reply by Myne Whitman on February 17, 2011 at 5:07pm

Thanks Charles, I dream that I'm a song writer.

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Permalink Reply by charles amobi nwokoro on February 17, 2011 at 5:10pm

Honestly, u can. We need lyrics that hv a lot of meaning like yours. We are tired of the Timaya type of stuff-hahahaha.Thats why i love 2face songs.Plz work on making it great 4 u 4 us.

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Permalink Reply by Charles Ugochukwu Okere on February 17, 2011 at 6:21pm

A poet indeed. The sky will be your limit if you do not relent.

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Permalink Reply by Myne Whitman on February 17, 2011 at 6:28pm

Thank you Charles and Charles, :)

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Permalink Reply by Solomon Eze on February 17, 2011 at 11:37pm

may be i can help you showcase your talent

http://nairabrain.com

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Permalink Reply by Myne Whitman on February 18, 2011 at 12:44am

How can you do that Solomon, I'll be grateful.

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Permalink Reply by Okolobah Efe Michael on February 18, 2011 at 2:21am

What inspired you to do this good piece? On a lighter mood if you were lonely when you did this piece i think it is better for you there and if you fail to do more i will assume you are no longer lonely. Keep it up and the sky will be ur starting point.