I am so very lonely
The cold gets to my bones
I am solitary and alone
There are no real friends
I don’t need a crowd
Just someone to fulfill me
I feel so deep and empty
The hollowness is killing me

Thus I sit and wait
But time waits for no one
As the clock ticks the hours
And days and weeks go by
The crescent moon waxes and wanes
And the years roll away
Like palm fronds waving at the sky
My arms are wide open

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good poem.Can make a great song-hahaha.
Thanks Charles, I dream that I'm a song writer.
Honestly, u can. We need lyrics that hv a lot of meaning like yours. We are tired of the Timaya type of stuff-hahahaha.Thats why i love 2face songs.Plz work on making it great 4 u 4 us.
A poet indeed.  The sky will be your limit if you do not relent.
Thank you Charles and Charles, :)

may be i can help you showcase your talent

 

http://nairabrain.com

How can you do that Solomon, I'll be grateful.
What inspired you to do this good piece? On a lighter mood if you were lonely when you did this piece i think it is better for you there and if you fail to do more i will assume you are no longer lonely. Keep it up and the sky will be ur starting point.
Thanks Okolobah!

good one.....but is thr any motive behind it.

jst bn curious.

 

Just thought of those who are lonely and wrote this. Thanks
Myne you seem to me a bundle of talents.  Can you write and sing?  I am a song writer and a singer too. I advise you to keep it up.

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